Friday, November 28, 2008

Electricity

The website i went under is called =www. how to be safe around electricity . Then i went under the 3 one and then i click saftey at home and a picture comes up and it is 2 kids and the floored watching t.v .
I think the author created this web site for children and young adults. It tell people about outdoors safety and indoors safety. It also ask’s if you want to know more about electricity.( I didn’t go under if you want to know more about electricity) but you can if you want to learn more about electricity.
The purposed of the website is to let people know about electricity and some safety tips to let people know what They should do around electrictiy .
The type of information is givein here is different types of ways to be safe around electricity , it gives a lot of safety tips about electricity.
I think this web site is easy to use (for me ) because it just tell you all about it and there is not clicking all over the place so it makes it easier to read, all you have to do is roll down and read and it gives all the information you need to do about electricity.
I think it looks all right , I think they could have more color or pictures , when you go on it all it is boring so it can get people eye.
I think I would tell them that they need more color and picture and maybe say what else can happened to you if you play with the wires that can shock you . And that if kids go an it should have some drawings of some kind of electricity pictures.
I would give them a 4. Because it could add more details and show more pictures and tell a bit more about electricity thinks and how you get shock or badly hurt.

2 comments:

crazy monkey said...

i did alot of work to this

kennedy i am beat out
lol

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Keshia